I received feedback from my professor and tutor. I need to add more detail to my essay. You can enhance my paper.
This is the feedback I received from my professor:
here should be introductory information as well as a clearly stated thesis. I’m really not sure of the focus here. Remember to base the writing on the article. Some suggestions for writing are:
What does it mean to be an American?
How do we feel about our rights under the law?
How do we feel about other people’s rights under the law?
What should we do to improve the places where we live (neighborhoods, cities, counties, states, country)?
Please read the feedback from the tutor where they state changes need to be made.
Please read the article and answer this question.
For “I’m a Canadian, and I’m Applying for US Citizenship” answer the following:
What conceptions of citizenship do you think different groups of voters had in the 2016 presidential election? How do these conceptions affect people in the United States now?
